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BruceG
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 Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:24 pm Post subject: Looking for critique: E-Learning/Instructional Demo |
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Hi all,
A Happy Thanksgiving to you all! I wanted to post a recent E-Learning/Instructional Demo for your review. Folks here have been very generous with previous critiques and I am VERY grateful for that.
As always, tough, honest feedback is what I'm looking for in all phases of what you hear (i.e. - the read itself, production, accoustics, etc.). As always, I thank you in advance for any feedback given. 
BTW, I've been running into problems with Internet Explorer accessing my Soundcloud account. For best results, please try Google Chrome or Mozilla Firefox to listen. Thank you!
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BruceG
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Hi - just wanted to give this a little bump to see if there are any takers on this.
Many thanks in advance...
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Jeffrey Kafer
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BruceG
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Sorry - my apologies. Will definitely not happen again...
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Bruce
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I'll give you one general direction. Watch your diction. There are a few slightly slurry spots that shouldn't be left in any production and certainly not a demo. Practice, practice, practice. This from a true mush mouth by nature.
Also, all of your pieces seem to be a bit "salesy" in topic. How about adding something truly instructional, as in equipment, software, or company procedures, and without music behind it.
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BruceG
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Hi Bruce - thanks for those observations! It's not always easy to pick up on these things; I can definitely put this knowledge to work for me.
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