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Mike Harrison
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:39 pm    Post subject: Sequencing Feedback Desired Reply with quote

I'm pretty much satisfied with the segments for this general narration compilation demo, but I'm not at all sure about their sequencing.

If you're not busy and willing to subject yourself to my noise, I'd appreciate any feedback on the sequencing... and the content, too, if you're so moved.

Many, many thanks upon you!

https://mike-harrison.com/vobb/180405-MikeHarrison-GenNar-Seq-1.mp3
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You could easily split this into two demos, television narration and corporate narration. I enjoyed the civil war and Calistoga train pieces the most and might shift them forward. The ticking noise in the first cut was annoying as heck to my ears...maybe not to others.


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