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FinMac Lucky 700
Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 705 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 11:47 pm Post subject: New website - does it work on your phone? |
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Hei!
Greetings again from Finland.
Just created a new website and would love feedback or suggestions on it.
Does it work on your mobile ?
Whatever feedback you can give is most appreciated !
www.scottsvoiceover.com _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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Kristin Lennox Flight Attendant
Joined: 30 Apr 2011 Posts: 858
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 7:43 am Post subject: |
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Works on mine!
I have one comment on the content. You seem to do a little "apologizing" in your About Me and Services: "I have a professional quality studio, though it's not as good as it could be right now"... and "I'd love to work on your project -- but I might turn it down because I don't like it"...
I know this isn't exactly how you worded it, but why even put that thought in a potential client's mind? All they need to know is that you have a professional studio, not what stage of renovation it's in. And that you'd love to work with them -- if someone wants a spot for a new, aerodynamic club for baby seals, you can cross that bridge when you get to it...
Just make the wording simple and positive. No "buts" allowed.
_________________ Always look on the bright side of life.
Dee doo. Dee doot doot doo dee doo.
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FinMac Lucky 700
Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 705 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 7:51 am Post subject: Thanks Kristin |
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Thanks for the great feedback. Will change those things very soon! _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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DougVox The Gates of Troy
Joined: 10 Jan 2007 Posts: 1705 Location: Miami
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 8:08 am Post subject: |
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Works well here, too! (iPhone.)
I'll also agree with Kristin, and add this:
This strikes me as potentially off-putting: "All projects will be considered, but some projects may be turned down based on availability, or a conflict with my personal beliefs. I only want to record for projects that I can stand behind 100%."
Seems like something that you'd want to reserve for use on the (hopefully) rare occasion when this situation comes up, rather than publicly stating from the start. (Just thinking that it might turn off some people who'd otherwise love to work with you, that's all.) _________________ Doug Turkel (tur-KELL)
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FinMac Lucky 700
Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 705 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 9:15 am Post subject: Thanks Doug! |
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Thanks Doug and Kristin for point out something that did not belong to a proper website. Appreciate you both taking the time.
Don't know what I was thinking about when I wrote that...but it is no longer there
Is it OK to have such a simple website ? _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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Jeffrey Kafer Assistant Zookeeper
Joined: 09 Dec 2006 Posts: 4931 Location: Location, Location!
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 1:47 pm Post subject: |
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Its absolutely OK to have a simple website. Mine is even simpler: one page. Everything a prospective buyer needs. _________________ Jeff
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