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Bailey
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:07 pm    Post subject: spec proposal Reply with quote

I put this spec ad together as a proposal to our church. It’s not supposed to sound like a commercial or an infomercial.
I thought I'd run it up the flagpole and see if it catches the wind.
PC2007
It's a bit long... 62 seconds.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Where is this supposed to get play and what's the target demo? I think the music was a little too busy and distracting... I'm anal when it comes to music though.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bailey,

I had a similar reaction to the music. It seemed a bit distracting to me. Your voiceover is nicely understated.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So much for the spec... someone beat me to the punch. It's all good.
Thanks again for the critiques...

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Sounds a bit over processed, but a good presentation.
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