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Updated General Narration Demo

 
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Mike Harrison
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 26, 2022 3:05 pm    Post subject: Updated General Narration Demo Reply with quote

More variety, but no less talk (a nod to my radio days). Please tell me whatever jumps out at you - bad or good - in this new cut of my general narration demo. Thanks!
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Moosevoice
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2022 10:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey Mike,
My humble opinion is that this mostly sounds great.
The only things that jumped out at me was the transition from the first piece to the second was abrupt. I feel like there should be a beat in there.
Also, the 'looking glass' segment sounded a LITTLE 'charactery/cartoony' to me. I mean that in the most constructive way possible. It sounded a littlel 'too much.'
That said, I don't have a lot of experience with narration/doc demos.
Good luck sir!
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