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Mike Harrison M&M
Joined: 03 Nov 2007 Posts: 2029 Location: Equidistant from New York City and Philadelphia, along the NJ Shore
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2022 3:05 pm Post subject: Updated General Narration Demo |
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More variety, but no less talk (a nod to my radio days). Please tell me whatever jumps out at you - bad or good - in this new cut of my general narration demo. Thanks! _________________ Mike
Male Voice Over Talent
I have taken leave of my sensors.
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Moosevoice Backstage Pass
Joined: 16 Nov 2012 Posts: 421 Location: Iowa
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2022 10:03 am Post subject: |
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Hey Mike,
My humble opinion is that this mostly sounds great.
The only things that jumped out at me was the transition from the first piece to the second was abrupt. I feel like there should be a beat in there.
Also, the 'looking glass' segment sounded a LITTLE 'charactery/cartoony' to me. I mean that in the most constructive way possible. It sounded a littlel 'too much.'
That said, I don't have a lot of experience with narration/doc demos.
Good luck sir! _________________ www.moosevoice.com |
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