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annesayre
Joined: 03 Mar 2020 Posts: 6 Location: 60640
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:38 pm Post subject: Explainer project from March |
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Hi all,
This is my first post here. It's a project from earlier this year; the first one netted me a second job with this client and I'm curious for feedback from a well seasoned crew (there are things I hear now that I would change). Thanks in advance!
P.S. I am not responsible for music or final mixing, just the VO.
https://youtu.be/IJZ1rmwwzx8 |
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Philip Banks Je Ne Sais Quoi
Joined: 20 Jun 2005 Posts: 11059 Location: Portgordon, Scotland
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2020 12:45 am Post subject: |
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It trotts along very nicely. They booked you, twice, so don't overthink things. Keep your own notes for next time. The fact that you are able to self critique is all you need.
Bon Chance! |
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Bruce Boardmeister
Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 7963 Location: Portland, OR
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:03 am Post subject: |
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A very nice read for an early project.... and it's a cool product.
As you do more and more narrations you will have more fun with words that provide the color such as adjectives, and those compare and contrast phrases. I'm thinking subtle differences for an informational/sales piece like this one.
Keep it up!
Bruce _________________ VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. . |
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juliaknippen Club 300
Joined: 25 Nov 2012 Posts: 348 Location: NYC
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2020 11:27 am Post subject: |
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I love your delivery. It's understated and conversational without lacking energy. This is a very in-demand sound at the moment. Well done! _________________ www.juliaknippen.com
Her Voice Will Grow on You |
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annesayre
Joined: 03 Mar 2020 Posts: 6 Location: 60640
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2020 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks very much for the feedback! |
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