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Don Hammock
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:11 am    Post subject: Having hard time posting link Reply with quote

If I can get this to post-please give inputs-good,bad, or ugly.Thanks ,Don

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Hart
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don,

Given the subject material I would like to hear you be a bit more conversational. It's just a little too obvious you are reading from a script. Think of it this way, you're having a very important, but a little awkward conversation with a close friend. Other than that, the reads are upbeat, friendly, warm, and compassionate. I think you hit the tone just right.

Technically, since it's for the web I'd like to hear the bottom end cleaned up a little bit. Maybe use EQ to roll off some of the bass and put a little more oomph in the upper-middle range. I think I'd turn the music down just a skosh. I say that only because the of the likelihood of clients with impaired hearing.

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