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Mike Paul
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PostPosted: Thu May 30, 2024 9:06 pm    Post subject: Explainer Demo Reply with quote

For those familiar with what makes great explainer demos, I'd appreciate your take on my first one.

Link: Explainer Demo v1

This is actual work cut together into a 1:40 long demo with 5 clips that demonstrate different approaches and industries, so that's why each sounds different--I didn't produce any of these, just cut them together into a demo.

First time doing this arrangement stuff. It's fun.
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PostPosted: Fri May 31, 2024 9:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All decent samples although as a personal preference I'd put the first cut back later in the demo. So go forth and deliver!


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PostPosted: Fri May 31, 2024 9:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Bruce, what makes you want the first cut a little later?
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