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Moosevoice
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 9:41 am    Post subject: Moose commercial demo 2022 Reply with quote

I did a refresh on my commercial demo.
Would love some feedback on it.
Thanks,
Moose
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just my opinion… all clips are good but I’d consider taking the first two and put them at the end. Opening with the “woo!” and water slide etc. would be fun and the clip after that had a bit of unique cadence. Just trying to stand out amongst the others.


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your reads are nice. I agree with Bruce about the open. But I would record something new. What is missing is a more conversational you. You handle the stylized stuff great. I wanna hear you shooting the shit, pure conversation, less sell. That sound is SO in, yet lacking on your demo. But I do like what you have!
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2022 3:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gentlemen,
Thank you so much for the feedback.
I've made some changes. Move some things and added a couple 'more conversations' in there.
Lemme know what you think...again.
Thanks.

The revised version is here.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2022 11:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wondering if anyone had a chance to hear the revised demo?

I know you're busy and appreciate the listen.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2022 11:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

On this listen everything sounds very compressed giving things a harsher sound to my ear. Your click it or ticket and Taver(?) spot were your best conversational reads.


Onward!


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2022 11:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bruce wrote:
very compressed


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got it. Thanks Bruce!
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