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My very first VO Spot.

 
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Heavy D
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 11:48 am    Post subject: My very first VO Spot. Reply with quote

http://www.vo-bb.com/demos/Smooth%20Jazz%20MP3.mp3

Hey Gang,
Not really for serious review, more like "free entertainment" but please chime in as you wish with pointers and any thoughts (good, bad or ugly) you may have.... I joined in Jan 2007 and this is my first shot at actually showing someone my first stuff. Embarrassed

I have learned so much from all of you and have had a blast so far!
Thank You DB ! and all of you on the VO-BB!
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Way to get into the pool, Heavy D. Congrats.

The spot sort of evoked a 60's feeling in me; made me think of words like groovy, right on, and Strawberry Alarm Clock. Also, it gave me the munchies.
Way to go.
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You've got atleast a 5 second lead on your file. I kept waiting for the file to play. You need to keep your "dead air" down to a minimum... about 1 second.

The music mix sounded fine, but the vocals... to me... were quite slow... almost hypnotic. You may try a more natural read.

You also may want to put together a commercial read, They have a way of allowing you to present your vocal features better. Don't worry about mixing at this time.
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Congrats Heavy D. Many more to come.

I enjoyed your album "Blue Funk" back in the 90's......
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I somehow think it's a different Heavy D....
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I do too.
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Heavy D
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 6:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Same size, Different guy! Rolls Eyes

Has been my nick name for ten years while I was in Detroit.....
My name is Dean.....and I'm a VO addict....and happy to be here!

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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 11:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i have a friend who calls me "heavy d" cool

i'm, like, 60.5" and a buck-18



but i might be able to crack a walnut (unshelled) with my quads...
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 1:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Geez, Diane... do you have to run around in the shower to get wet?

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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah.
when i take 'em. Sick
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 1:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn Hippies!
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 2:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Flowers Flowers Flowers Flowers Flowers Flowers Flowers

keep on truckin'
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