VO-BB - 19 YEARS OLD!

Tom Greenlee · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:21 pm Post subject:

OK....I ditched the Nissan spot....cutoff everything below 90HZ on the coffee spot....rearranged some of the spots. Did that make a difference? Is it ok?

New Demo Version 2
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mcm · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:51 pm Post subject:

The State Bird of Minnesota is still whooping it up in Central America -call the Rare Bird Alert! :-P

Inoccent

Tom Greenlee · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:07 pm Post subject:

hahahaha.....Mary....what you didn't know is that Costa Rica is one of the most notorious places for illegal Loon smuggling. They import approximately 53.5 million dollars in Loons annually due to the high demand for the unique sound of the Loon mating call. This spot accidentally caught the Loon's call and the FBI got wind of it and is currently in the process of an investigation. hahahahaha
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Bailey · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 9:29 pm Post subject:

Tom... Very nice job reworking to make the number 2 demo.
I'm beginning to feel inspired.

And don't worry about the Loon... most people probably don't even notice.
Just like most people don't notice that the train in the Sleep Train television commercial uses a diesel horn... but it's not a diesel.
Wink

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Tom Greenlee · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:18 am Post subject:

Thank You Bailey! Further on in my development, I plan on expanding the demo to reflect more of a variety of styles. I only want to showcase sytles that I feel competent in, not styles that I could probably work to get a demo spot for but be unable to deliver, or at the least have a very difficult time delivering should a client hire me based on that spot on my demo. So....I know I'm a bit limited right now, but I'd much rather be limited and feel confident that I can deliver, than showcase stuff that I have no business showcasing. It may be bad business practice to limit myself like this, but I believe in the long run it will pay off. In the meantime, I'm working hard to broaden my horizons. Thanks again Bailey for the kind words.
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"Communication without intelligence is noise; Intelligence without communication is irrelevant."

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Former Commandant of the Marine Corps

mcm · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:53 am Post subject:

Tom Greenlee · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:26 am Post subject:

Mary....are you part of the Costa Rican Loon smuggling ring? lol
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"Communication without intelligence is noise; Intelligence without communication is irrelevant."

Gen. Alfred. M. Gray, USMC
Former Commandant of the Marine Corps

tackerman · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:04 am Post subject:

You've got the deep, gravely market cornered! Smile

I'm still a bit of a VO pup so I don't usually critique... but the one thing that really stood out to me was the lack of a higher energy spot to break it up a little.

Tom Greenlee · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:20 am Post subject:

Yeah Tom.....I am not competent enough in that kind of delivery to include it in my demo.....this is my demo showcasing my ability as it currently stands. Whenever I feel I am competent in a new delivery style and can actually deliver it if needed, I will include a spot reflecting that on my demo. I just want to be careful not to put something on my demo I can't deliver. The high energy spots are not my forte as of this time in my development. But it's coming....as soon as I can get it in my repertoir.
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Powers · Guest

Tom - who knew?! I thought you were 'just another professional sound engineer' at VOICE. Great pipes!
- Powers -

Tom Greenlee · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:00 pm Post subject:

Thanks Powers. hahahaha Professional sound engineer.....lol.....let's see...this here funny lookin jack plugs into this here thing I do believe...wait....no....yeah....hahahahahahaha
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"Communication without intelligence is noise; Intelligence without communication is irrelevant."

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Former Commandant of the Marine Corps