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Explainer project from March

 
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annesayre



Joined: 03 Mar 2020
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2020 2:38 pm    Post subject: Explainer project from March Reply with quote

Hi all,
This is my first post here. It's a project from earlier this year; the first one netted me a second job with this client and I'm curious for feedback from a well seasoned crew (there are things I hear now that I would change). Thanks in advance!
P.S. I am not responsible for music or final mixing, just the VO.

https://youtu.be/IJZ1rmwwzx8
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Philip Banks
Je Ne Sais Quoi


Joined: 20 Jun 2005
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2020 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It trotts along very nicely. They booked you, twice, so don't overthink things. Keep your own notes for next time. The fact that you are able to self critique is all you need.

Bon Chance!
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A very nice read for an early project.... and it's a cool product.

As you do more and more narrations you will have more fun with words that provide the color such as adjectives, and those compare and contrast phrases. I'm thinking subtle differences for an informational/sales piece like this one.

Keep it up!

Bruce
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juliaknippen
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2020 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love your delivery. It's understated and conversational without lacking energy. This is a very in-demand sound at the moment. Well done!
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annesayre



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PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2020 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks very much for the feedback!
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