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		| Philip Banks Je Ne Sais Quoi
 
  
 Joined: 20 Jun 2005
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 Location: Portgordon, Scotland
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:06 am    Post subject: The blood of your video business text have live! |   |  
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				| Truth when it write company speak impact wow! Time there are some take bad language of once typed then transfusion for out source this type of speaker for use. Magnum cillit fisk bang! All of trial to expose your private affair of the new customers gentleman. Savings of investment! Huge massive kiss from you’re Investment Director for control of cost in project. Effect? Lost of massage! Sales of nothings or much less more negative impact. Conclusion for drawing away? Facilitate of writer is a native for language of text to video who must have knowing of his doing about must be. Give monies of which can be correct amount. Wow! This now time your promotion video message smash in front of face impact to be impressive ROI several plenty.
 Amateur translate or may you for the text. Leave to pro and not play with yourself in the office.
 Thank you for attending with this message.
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		| craigsvoicetalent Contributor IV
 
  
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 Location: South of Houston, TX
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:35 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Now, this put a smile on my face. Thank you sir for making my morning. _________________
 Reading, talking and listening.
 
 British Voice Over
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		| Karl in CA 
 
  
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 Location: SF Bay area, California
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:47 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Isn't those a truth? As being a beginner, I are encountered by much of this frequently! |  | 
	
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		| Lee Gordon A Zillion
 
  
 Joined: 25 Jul 2008
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 Location: West Hartford, CT
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 9:35 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| I couldn't have said it better, myself. _________________
 Lee Gordon, O.A.V.
 Voice President of the United States
 www.leegordonproductions.com
 Twitter:  @LeeGordonVoice
 
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		| todd ellis A Zillion
 
  
 Joined: 02 Jan 2007
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 Location: little egypt
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 9:51 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| i don't get it.  it's perfectly clear to me. _________________
 "i know philip banks":     todd ellis
 who's/on/1st?
 
 
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		| Bruce Boardmeister
 
  
 Joined: 06 Jun 2005
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 Location: Portland, OR
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:13 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Is that a script from a Middle Eastern client? It sure looks similar to ones I’ve been given, often with the caveat, “don’t change a word... they’re very proud of their English”. 
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 VO-BB Member #31 Enlisted June, 2005
 
   I'm not a Zoo, but over the years I've played one on radio/TV. .
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		| Mike Harrison M&M
 
  
 Joined: 03 Nov 2007
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 Location: Equidistant from New York City and Philadelphia, along the NJ Shore
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:21 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Just this (Wednesday) morning I received a job whose script began thusly (company and product names and analyses sizes changed; capitalizations, punctuation and line breaks were not): 
 
  	  | Quote: |  	  | Welcome to Acme fruit bat detectors designed. For analyses ranging from teeny-tiny 
 To somewhat bigger scale.
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 When I politely said to my client, an English-speaking European VO, that the script appeared to have been translated and wasn't quite right, the response was that "The text is fine. But here it is the way you like it." The new version was:
 
 
  	  | Quote: |  	  | Welcome to Acme fruit bat detectors: designed for analyses ranging from ____ to ____ scale. | 
 
 Sometimes my attempts at sanding rocket thrusters feels like. More feeding chimps at noon.
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 Mike
 Male Voice Over Talent
 I have taken leave of my sensors.
 
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		| bobsouer Frequent Flyer
 
  
 Joined: 15 Jul 2006
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 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
 
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				|  Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2019 11:25 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Most impressive Mr. Banks! _________________
 Be well,
 Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
 The second nicest guy in voiceover.
 +1-724-613-2749
 Source Connect, phone patch, pony express
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