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JackB Contributor
Joined: 11 Feb 2012 Posts: 28 Location: Chicago, IL
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Scott Pollak The Gates of Troy
Joined: 01 Jun 2010 Posts: 1903 Location: Looking out at the San Juan mountains
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Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 6:45 am Post subject: |
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Since you only posted the link and didn't indicate if you wanted feedback, critique, whatever, I will ASSUME you do, since you posted it in the "Critique" section.
I like your voice, quite a bit. You have a very engaging sound with an age-range that is a bit hard to define (which is good, because you can probably fit a lot of age ranges).
As an audiobook narrator, I, personally, just hate the trend of monotone delivery that so many narrators seem to think is vogue. I like the personality you're injecting into the read.
My only real suggestion is SLOW DOWN! A listener has to have time to take in the audio, process it and move on. Your very quick pacing makes it difficult to keep up. Pause more after sentences and paragraphs.
But other than that.... I really like what you have here! _________________ Scott R. Pollak
Clients include Pandora, NPR Atlanta, Wells Fargo, Cisco, Humana, Publix, UPS, AT&T, HP, Xerox and more.
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FinMac Lucky 700
Joined: 14 Jan 2013 Posts: 705 Location: In a really cool place...Finland!
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Posted: Fri May 06, 2016 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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To be honest, and I think that is what you want, it was very difficult to follow.
Agree with Scott, the pace was way to fast. But for me, it was also difficult to differentiate between the 2 characters. That must be the real challenge to bringing an audio book to life.
Not an audio book narrator myself, so take my comments with a grain of salt. But I have recently been listening to a book produced as a radio drama, and because the actors are wonderful, it really brought it to life.
Hope those comments will be helpful. _________________ www.scottsvoiceover.com - An American voice in Finland
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