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Which one? 2 Video narration demos
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 8:31 am    Post subject: Which one? 2 Video narration demos Reply with quote

Greetings from a cool place, Finland!

Getting inspiration from Lance Blair's earlier production of a video demo, I finally put something together in iMovie. Actually there are 2 of them.

Which of them is better in your opinion?

Any thoughts or suggestions?

Thanks for your time.

Mac

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPtSfOVGWxw&feature=youtu.be

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lWwm79dp-oE&feature=youtu.be
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2014 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can't access the first one, it's set to "private".

cheers,
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2014 10:20 pm    Post subject: Ooops! Reply with quote

Hello Andrew,

Thanks for letting me know. I apologize to anyone who tried to check it out and could not open it. It is corrected now.

Mac
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 4:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Mac,

I think they both sound great, but for image flow, I like the first link better. The only thing I might suggest for that one is to possibly shorten the first example. It just seems a bit longer than the rest.

Hope that helps!
Fran
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 4:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually...scratch that. I just took another look at it...the length on the first spot is good.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:42 pm    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

Thanks Fran for taking the time to watch and listen.

Thanks also for the encouragement! Appreciate it!

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 9:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My vote would also be for the first one, out of the two.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 10:47 am    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback. I am leaning that way myself.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 3:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the first one. Nice voice.

How'd you end up in Finland?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 6:57 am    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

Thanks for the complement and encouragement.

How did I end up in Finland? To make a long story short - I married a Finnish woman.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 10:14 pm    Post subject: Re: Thanks! Reply with quote

FinMac wrote:

How did I end up in Finland? To make a long story short - I married a Finnish woman.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Mac,

Both look excellent, but I agree with most of the good people here and think Number 1 takes the biscuit. The water visuals made me gag for a gin & tonic.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:36 am    Post subject: Thanks for taking the time Reply with quote

Thanks George for sharing you opinion about which video to use.

I have gone with the first one. I love the video these guys produce and working with them was a real feather in my cap. My concern was if my voiceover from the first one was strong enough. I loved the video they did.

Their showreel from 2012 blows me away.

Here is the link if you are interested to watch...

http://www.brinkhelsinki.com/visual-storytelling/brink-showreel-2012

By the way, it was just water, pure water, no gin!

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Mac!

If it helps... am leaning towards the first one also..

And I've just seen you've gone with the first... see, excellent choice! Smile
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 10:35 am    Post subject: Thanks Kookster Reply with quote

Thanks Kooster for your input and welcome to the forum.

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