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Hart Assistant Asylum Chief
Joined: 03 Jan 2006 Posts: 2107 Location: Foley, AL
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:09 am Post subject: now I'm annoyed |
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I hate these awful sponsorships we have to clear on the radio stations. Like this little gem of a POS:
THIS ____ REPORT BROUGHT TO YOU BY [client]
THIS WEEK USE YOUR [client] PLUS CARD AND SAVE ON PILGRIM'S PRIDE SPLIT CHICKEN BREAST ONLY 99 CENTS A POUND. AND PURCHASE CANTALOUPES, LITTLE DEBBIE SNACK CAKES, AND MORE ALL TEN FOR TEN DOLLARS AS [client]'S TEN FOR TEN SALE RETURNS.
10 seconds... right. Read it as fast as you can and see how many times you flub "Pilgrim's Pride Split Chicken Breast".
I don't know who writes this stuff but they need a new job. Can it be read in 10 seconds? Apparently. Will the listener grab any meaning from it? Probably not.
Ok, rant over. Thanks for letting me vent. _________________ Hart Voice Overs Blog
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Don G. King's Row
Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 1071 Location: MA
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:43 am Post subject: |
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Where's John Moschitta when you need him?
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tackerman The Gates of Troy
Joined: 14 Jun 2006 Posts: 1741 Location: in the ether
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:50 am Post subject: |
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Better you than me... |
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Deirdre Czarina Emeritus
Joined: 10 Nov 2004 Posts: 13016 Location: East Jesus, Maine
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:13 pm Post subject: |
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Sometimes my "15-second" ad is longer than my traffic report.
Pilgrim's Pride split chicken breast.
Crumb-crisp coating. _________________ DBCooperVO.com |
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mcm Smart Kitteh
Joined: 10 Dec 2004 Posts: 2600 Location: w. MA, USA
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:22 pm Post subject: |
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You know, crisp crumb coating I can understand, but I don't get crumb-crisp coating at all. |
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Deirdre Czarina Emeritus
Joined: 10 Nov 2004 Posts: 13016 Location: East Jesus, Maine
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:26 pm Post subject: |
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Neither did Orson. _________________ DBCooperVO.com |
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Hart Assistant Asylum Chief
Joined: 03 Jan 2006 Posts: 2107 Location: Foley, AL
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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HA!
Well, the pain of it is that we're completely automated at the stations now as they are in lock down save money pray for a quick sale mode. We have to run the sponsorships to fufill contractual obligations even though we don't have any traffic/wx/sports reports to sponsor anymore. So, they have to be 10 seconds long so I can cram three of them into a stop set each hour. They're supposed to be anyway, but the regional reps cheat that all the time. _________________ Hart Voice Overs Blog
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Deirdre Czarina Emeritus
Joined: 10 Nov 2004 Posts: 13016 Location: East Jesus, Maine
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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It doesn't get any better in the bigger markets as long as ad execs are writing copy.
The incompetence only gets more infuriating.
Signed,
Duncan Donuts _________________ DBCooperVO.com |
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Hart Assistant Asylum Chief
Joined: 03 Jan 2006 Posts: 2107 Location: Foley, AL
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:48 pm Post subject: |
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I've never worked at a radio station that had a copy writer. It was always either me or the sales weasel. I hear they do wonders though. _________________ Hart Voice Overs Blog
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dhouston67 VO-BB Intarwebz Glossary Administrator
Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Posts: 1166 Location: Right next door to Sandra Bullock. No, really.
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:48 pm Post subject: |
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I once had a sales guy bring me a piece of copy with the phrase
COME SEE THE HIPTOMIST
...I asked him what that was supposed to be, he stated that he was having trouble spelling "hypnotist" and went with the closest one he could muster.
Egad. _________________ Great Voice. Great Choice. For Voice Talking and stuff.
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dhouston67 VO-BB Intarwebz Glossary Administrator
Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Posts: 1166 Location: Right next door to Sandra Bullock. No, really.
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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Hart wrote: | I've never worked at a radio station that had a copy writer. It was always either me or the sales weasel. I hear they do wonders though. |
That was one of my last radio gigs --- I'd worked for the GM years earlier; he was in a panic because NONE of the sales staff could write anything resembling good copy. I wrote and produced spots all day long... _________________ Great Voice. Great Choice. For Voice Talking and stuff.
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Don G. King's Row
Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 1071 Location: MA
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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Many (many, many, many) years ago, there was a salesman at the station where I worked who would bring me a piece of copy for production and it would be a perfect :45.
Him: "Don, this has to get on the air by this afternoon."
Me: "Wait. Don't leave yet. Is this a :60 or a :30?"
Him: "What do you mean?"
Me: "Is it supposed to be a :60 or a :30?"
Him: "A :30."
Me: "Well, it's way too long for a :30. I'm going to have to cut a lot of copy."
Him: "Then make it a :60."
Ah yes, small market radio. |
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louzucaro The Gates of Troy
Joined: 13 Jul 2006 Posts: 1915 Location: Chicago area
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:40 pm Post subject: |
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dhouston67 wrote: | I once had a sales guy bring me a piece of copy with the phrase
COME SEE THE HIPTOMIST
...I asked him what that was supposed to be, he stated that he was having trouble spelling "hypnotist" and went with the closest one he could muster.
Egad. |
This wins the award for the funniest thing I've read all day. That's classic. _________________ Lou Zucaro
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Hart Assistant Asylum Chief
Joined: 03 Jan 2006 Posts: 2107 Location: Foley, AL
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:20 am Post subject: |
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Don G. wrote: | a salesman at the station where I worked who would bring me a piece of copy for production and it would be a perfect :45. |
I know that guy! I've worked with him before too. _________________ Hart Voice Overs Blog
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tammymcd Contributor IV
Joined: 12 Jul 2006 Posts: 127 Location: Phoenix, AZ
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:47 pm Post subject: EGADS IS RIGHT |
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Quote: | Don G. wrote:
a salesman at the station where I worked who would bring me a piece of copy for production and it would be a perfect :45.
I know that guy! I've worked with him before too.
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Yeah - I know him too - I'm fairly certain he went to work the big utility out here and was my boss!! Aren't you glad he's now in a position to REALLY screw things up? EGADS is right!!
Hey I have a totally unrelated question...what does WWDD and all those other WWetc etc. mean? I know the WWJD thing - but....?
just wondering. _________________ Life is what happens when you're making other plans. |
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