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cyclometh
King's Row


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:26 am    Post subject: Audiobook Feedback Reply with quote
This is the opening chapter of a gothic urban fantasy I'm considering using as an audiobook demo. This is my second attempt, and I'm open to any feedback I can use to improve it.

Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/cyclometh/audiobook-demo-butcher-bird-2
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whalewtchr
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Your pacing is good. Allows a listener to follow along which is important.
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