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first crack at a promo demo

 
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Jeffrey Kafer
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PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 10:15 pm    Post subject: first crack at a promo demo Reply with quote
Someone suggested I might be good at promos. Here's a first crack at it. Thoughts?

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Frank F
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PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 10:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Smooth out your read. A sentence starts with a capitol letter and ends with a period. I many cases there are no stops in between.

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