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Rob Ellis
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:37 am    Post subject: New Demo Reply with quote

I don't know if any of you do car dealer demos, but here's my take:

http://www.vo-bb.com/demos/robelliscardealerdemo.mp3

....thank you for your support, encouragement and helpful suggestions! Smile
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Bill Campbell
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Joined: 09 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rob, I think you do a nice job on the National style read. Your "real guy" delivery.

The high energy, screaming, local type car spot is not gonna be your strength.
I think that's a good thing, though. Most car ads are done with that old school Top 40 radio dj delivery. There's a bunch of old jocks around to do that.

Play to your strengths. I think you have a charming, real, slightly comic delivery! There's work for THAT voice.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rob-
That is very nice work. Have you gotten gigs with it yet?
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Rob Ellis
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your feedback guys!

After listening a gazillion times I like the first cut the best, and think the GMC Sonoma read has some potential, but at this point am thinking to scrap the "Moore Cadillac" and "Hampton Toyota" reads
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd agree that the Hampton spot can go...the High-Octane Screech Guy ain't you.
But keep the Cadillac, insofar as your delivery is more measured and high-end and is probably better suited for classy, upscale car ads, much like the first clip.

Of course, I've voiced exactly two auto spots in 10 years (that's fewer, I think, than Ralph Nader has), so what do I know?
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