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		GretScot Guest
 
 
 
 
 
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				 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:45 am    Post subject: Web Site | 
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				Would appreciate comments and critique:
 
www.scottishvo.com
 
 
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		bobsouer Frequent Flyer
  
  Joined: 15 Jul 2006 Posts: 9883 Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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				 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 9:18 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Gordon,
 
 
The site seems rather busy for my tastes. Also, I get a "file not found error" when I click the "testimonial" link.
 
 
I do like that you have your demos ready to play right on the front page. _________________ Be well,
 
Bob Souer (just think of lemons)
 
The second nicest guy in voiceover.
 
+1-724-613-2749
 
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		Yoda117 M&M
  
  Joined: 20 Dec 2006 Posts: 2362 Location: Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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		Dave Lucky 700
  
  Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 727 Location: Houston, Texas
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				 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:07 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				I'll go with Bob and Yoda and make it a "three-fer". 
 
 
Site is too busy with extra material (right side of page) that isn't vo related. Maybe you can remove it and put it in a more appropriate place (related links?).
 
 
Dave _________________ . If at first you don't succeed, then bomb disposal probably isn't for you.  | 
			 
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		GretScot Guest
 
 
 
 
 
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				 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:58 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				| Thanks for your comments guys. I'll work on less busy. | 
			 
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