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Commercial Demo for a Character Guy

 
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DaveChristi
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Joined: 03 Aug 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 2:36 pm    Post subject: Commercial Demo for a Character Guy Reply with quote

I have always marketed myself as a character voice or the "Not-A-Big-Voice-Guy" voice guy. This type of niche marketing has served me well, but there are a lot of "Not-Big-Voice-Guy" things I have done that aren't exactly characters.

So, I have put together a commercial demo. Whatcha think? (brutal honesty is always appreciated)
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mcm
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Location: w. MA, USA

PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 3:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love your sound.

There is a certain sameness to the reads though, in both pitch and pacing. Might want to shake it up. Also, Ben Franklin - "practically inefficiently"? Watch the diccion, Monsieur.

Ends too abruptly - ease me out somehow. Break some crockery or something.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dave hi,

Overall, I very much like the atmosphere of your spots, but it might have been the processing or so, it seems to me that a lot of times your 's' seems to slurr. In the final part of the demo this can't be heard by the way.

Keep up the good work! My € 0.02
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 11:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks to a wonderful PM I have made my decision on this demo. Thanks for all of your input.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought it was just me, but now that Edo has mentioned it, I also thought I was picking up something with your S's.

Otherwise - I say it's good stuff!
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