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Tre M.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2018 11:22 am    Post subject: Radio Imaging Demo Reply with quote

Alright folks....this here is me new Imaging Demo.

Take a listen if you may:

https://soundcloud.com/tremosley/urban-ac-imaging-demo
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Bruce
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2018 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I haven’t listened to popular and urban radio much in the past several years but I’m betting your chatty, sassy, cool conversational sound will be big with some stations. My only critique, and it’s a small one, is your pitch and tone are pretty similar in the first several clips and then you show variety later on. Can you mix it up a little and still be so “hot”? Ah, and can you cut the songs down a titch? If you can’t I get it. I just wanna hear every bit of you I can!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2018 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The whole thing sounds good: you sounded great, lots of momentum, slick editing, but when everything else dropped out and it was only you talking around 1:10... THAT was superlative.
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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2018 9:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice job!
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Tre M.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2018 9:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

audio'connell wrote:
Nice job!



Thanks Peter.....thanks to you all.


It's been an arduous task finding the right stations....I know it'll come.
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Bob Bergen
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2018 10:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I find it 90% outstanding.

It's too long. And that laundry list of artists is what drags much of it. But overall it needs a tighter edit. There's a music button at the beginning of each byte which just slows the whole thing down. Granted, imaging is very produced. But the music sfx sting a the top of each byte highlights your producer, not you. I think all this needs is some editing and tightening.
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