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Review of game character clip....Please

 
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SDNitro



Joined: 14 Nov 2012
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 17, 2016 10:21 am    Post subject: Review of game character clip....Please Reply with quote

Hi Everyone,
Hope everyone is doing AWESOME!!! I wanted some pro ears placed on my game character clip. Normally I just supply raw audio ( and some breathe removal ) to the engineers for any projects I voice remote. However I decided I wanted to go deeper and improve on my audio editing skills and would like some outside thoughts and critiques on this piece I created. I set this clip up similar to a demo in style. I created the exertion sounds, voices, and creature sounds, and some of the effects, the music pieces were freebies that I was allowed to modify to fit my vision of the scenes. How does the flow, feel, order music, etc. sound?

Thanks!
Jeremi Tigue

https://soundcloud.com/jeremitigue/game-characters
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Philip Banks
Je Ne Sais Quoi


Joined: 20 Jun 2005
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Location: Portgordon, Scotland

PostPosted: Fri Jun 17, 2016 10:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cracking good effort, well done! Must've taken ages to stick together.

This is not my field so I'll bow to the experts. I laughed as I typed that ...I'm a horrible person!

Just an opinion. I would've thought that this type of demo wouod need to take listeners on a journey and they would have to believe every second. I heard no journey and didn't really believe what was happening. I suspect when you find yourself lost in the narrative you've got something to sell.
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SDNitro



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2016 5:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the feed back Phillip. I was kinda thinking the same thing. I get so use to being kept in my hot box I doubt some of my own thoughts. I definitely no writer...maybe I need to find an avid gamer to help with the lines and then bring that journey to life.

PS. "Cracking good effort" your a horrible person. (Thats funny. Smile )
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