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Topic: Critique my DEMO |
bradhamilton
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Forum: Critique Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:15 am Subject: Critique my DEMO |
Thank you both so much, for the thoughts on my demo. It's a process for sure, but with time I'll hopefully be able to get a better quality demo done. |
Topic: Critique my DEMO |
bradhamilton
Replies: 4
Views: 9019
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Forum: Critique Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2019 11:43 am Subject: Critique my DEMO |
So... I had a local engineer put this together for me...- It was cheap - How do you feel? I look forward to anyone's response! Thanks!!
https://drive.google.com/open?id=14samxwC97Bmf8XfzeFu14W ... |
Topic: Lay It On Me-- |
bradhamilton
Replies: 6
Views: 10254
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Forum: Critique Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2018 10:01 am Subject: Lay It On Me-- |
Thanks Lance!
I agree totally, I'm working out the over-emphasizing (announcer syndrome) for sure! I appreciate you listening and helping me |
Topic: Part 2 Lay It On Me |
bradhamilton
Replies: 5
Views: 8487
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Forum: Critique Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2018 9:10 am Subject: Part 2 Lay It On Me |
Phil, Bruce, and Todd - Thanks so much for the input. I have much to learn, and I feel I can't shake the "announcer" side of doing the scripts. Even though I tone it down- I will continue an ... |
Topic: Lay It On Me-- |
bradhamilton
Replies: 6
Views: 10254
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Forum: Critique Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2018 9:06 am Subject: Lay It On Me-- |
Thanks Todd
I really need to open up and feel one with the product/script. I think I am leaning way more on the announcer side for reads. Even though I tone down I still evoke that "announcer&q ... |
Topic: Part 2 Lay It On Me |
bradhamilton
Replies: 5
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Forum: Critique Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2018 5:58 pm Subject: Part 2 Lay It On Me |
heres another-they wanted: We are looking for a read that's intelligent, friendly but authoritative.
My audition-
TLM103/id22/whisperroom
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PrW2Xb7zKAIiWy9E ... |
Topic: Lay It On Me-- |
bradhamilton
Replies: 6
Views: 10254
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Forum: Critique Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2018 5:50 pm Subject: Lay It On Me-- |
Please let me know your thoughts on these reads I've auditioned for- This read is calling for--We are looking for friendly, conversational. Not hard sell, but not too slow/soft. The target audience is ... |
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